DarkSword's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Arrival]

You make my eyes bleed

Fantastic work, with a mouse? Gee, I couldn't hope doing that kind of work with a huge tablet.. : /

Strong contrast, the light is very well done and beautiful, I like it very much! Your other art have a very nice personnal style, you really know your stuff.

thanks for the drawing!

[Robo sweatshop]

As always, awsome!

Don't really know what you'r doing in your biology classes, but it sure means tremendous drawing skills.. : )

you really have some serious talent, mister

thank you for sharing your hobby? with us! : )

[Pico scene 46]

Wow, very nice!

pretty good stuff, the tree in the background really takes a punch.. ^_^ Nice cartoon style, very well executed. For the bomb effect, I think it's a bit too yellow, but that's just me.

keep up the good work!

Hulalaoo responds:

Thanks, for a reason, i use red and yellow in the BOOM scenes, i like the carmesi BOOM !

[Red Baron]

Good stuff

pretty nice work and I have some suggestions

for shading, because your sky is blue, think about the light.. you need some very diffuse blue light on your character, from the top, and some very diffuse light from the bottom which is sun light hitting the sand and diffusing.. so sand color. Look at pictures of desert with characters on it..

else I would add some more details on the main character, like dust, dried blood, dents on armor, etc.. you already did for his sword so..

hope it helps, and nice work!

beastkid7 responds:

wow good advice ...in fact I might just go back in there and fix it up.

[Grape Vine Bracelet]

Good stuff

It looks pretty good, makes me wonder how you did the holes.. pretty puzzeling. I would do pretty basic drill/file but it would take alot of time

For the rest, it's pretty basic sheet metal shaped in a bracelet. Would be very nice if you could use some brazing to add pieces on top of this shape, to add some complexity.. then you go and make it plated to hide the soldering spots. Copper or brass is easily brazed with standardcopper plumbing hardware, cheap too.

still, very nice work!

radiodark responds:

Yes, I used a metal hole punch and a dremel in some places to start the holes, then a jeweler's saw to cut them out. Files, sandpaper and polishing wheel to finish it.
I doubt I'll add any more pieces to the bracelet, when I wear it it snags on everything in reach and I worry enough (probably more than is necessary) about the thin copper growing brittle and snapping without additional pieces adding tension. However, if I get around to making another I'll consider bending more of the that bend outward, and possibly building places to solder additional bits on into the design.
Your comment is quite useful; I'm a half decent solderer but had never heard of brazing, and while I'm still confused as to where the terms overlap, brazing looks like a very useful technique to know.

Wikipedia seems to indicate that brazing uses higher temperatures than soldering, but then that same page also seems to be under the impression that all silver solder melts at under 800 degrees Farenheight, and even easy solder melts at around 1240 degrees F, let alone the three other common grades of solder used by jewelers and enamelers.

I think it's probably just yet another case of various metalworking crafts (industrial/electronic manufacture/sculpture/jewelery/glassworking) all using the same terminology for usages tweaked to their specific fields, but if you've any light to shed on the pandemonium I'd be grateful.

[Fantasy Cave]

awsome stuff

some things I would improve:
light ray in the top left corner.. a bit too basic and not really necessary
the background clouds are too bright, seems like the rest of the picture is dull (really simple adjustment, but still)
be carefull of the brightness of the dark side of rocks in water reflection, doesn't make any sense to me

except for those, this is really gorgeous, honest. I can easily see that kind of art beeing in a film, like you were saying. I like it very much! wish I could do the same

keep 'em coming

[Desroxx II]

biology, really?

Ah come on, biology?? wtf.. you should be doing concept for films or games, or matte painting... I'm going in the game industry and I can't even do half as good as you in 2D.. it's a shame really (well both for you not using your talent and me not having much.. = p).

Anyway, very nice, and done fast too. 10/10, 5/5, thumbs up, high five...

keep doing it buddy, it's inspiring..

Kamikaye responds:

Well , biology is very inspirational :) And maybe one day I will have some of my illustrations published in "Nature" ;)

[Moonlight Flight]

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Well, what annoys me about this picture is the big text in front of the subject, I don't know if there really is any reason for this... breaks the picture too

for the art itself, I think the level of detail isn't even, the body of the dragon is at cartoon level of detail (a bit bland to be honest) and then the wings are much much more detailed, would be intesting to see as much details on the dragon.

The design is good, the pose is dynamic, nice choice of color but more variations would add much more depth to it (like the light have to be colored instead of white). If it's what you wanted then it's ok.

still think it's good work

Kralissa responds:

You're the second newgrounds person whom said that lol about the watermark on my artworks.

I know on new ground everyone respects everyone and they don't try to steal your flashs as much as we deviantART member get from other people.

In the deviantART world this is excepted as a normal thing and very will known as you care for your art then letting it be grabbed up by art thefts people.

I am in that way of artistic style, I make all my dragons cartoony with real featured like things. I do see my skin kinda lacks in some of my artworks before this, but having a dragon being a cartoon like is not a negative thing?

Well not to me XD, I should TRY draw realistic dragons ounce in my life lol

Thank you very much for this comment ^_^ I love newgrounds comment because on deviantART everyone is to nice or not so foreword to what they want to say or mean.

[Medieval Lady on Horse]

a guy?

I'm not sure if it's me or the picture, but the princess really looks like a guy to me (face, hands size, even chest at some extend)... else don't get me wrong, it's very good !

I think for the face, the eyes are too small, nose is too big, chin is too big, chin skin should be less saturated or something, more feminized lips... but the features are at the right place..

just my 2 cents buddy, nice work!

GotRedOnYou responds:

just dont tell the model I used to draw from, or she will be quite upset with you, believe it or nor, she is real and does look like this. analysing art is always great, but mocking how the figure looks judging by thier stature isnt fair, she is supposed to look like a middle aged woman of the 13th century, she is not a princess and is not supposed to look like a hollywood babe. your reviews should be a little less speculative next time chap :)